[DECLINED] City Scanner app
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[DECLINED] City Scanner app
Steam Name: ron_timmy1
Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198067088152/
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:53411212
1. How long have you been on the server?
About a week.
2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, I do indeed know how to properly roleplay.
3. Why do you want to play as a City Scanner?
I wish to play as a city scanner because it would be both fun for me, and beneficial to the server/community, and enhance roleplay for other players.
4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, I have read all of the city scanner application guidelines.
5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
I have learned that the scanners interact/speak in OTA format.
6. Do you understand not to argue with other players?
Yes, I understand not to argue with other players.
7. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?
Drop it, agree with the other player to end the disagreement, contact a staff member, or if no staff member is online, quickly leave the server or continue rp elsewhere, and contact one.
8. Why should we accept your application?
I believe you should accept my application because for the past 7 days I have been a loyal player to the server and community, and I plan to stay that way.
9. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?
Yes, I can indeed passive roleplay in depth.
10. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?
Yes, I have knowledge of the lore from the Half-Life series.
11. How active are you on the server?
Every day for at least couple hours.
12. Do you plan on being a loyal player?
Yes, I do plan on staying loyal to the server and community.
13. Give an example of how to roleplay as a city scanner, using the /me command.
/me approaches the citizen, beeping and hovering in the air.
/me takes a snapshot of the citizen, the picture being sent to all available units.
/me beeps some more, and begins to hover away from the citizen, wavering in it's path.
14. What are your Metropolice Force Digits? (You are required to have a MPF character.)
756
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Physical Description: Robotic looking object| Floats using anti-gravity technology| Has light armor in the front
Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198067088152/
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:53411212
1. How long have you been on the server?
About a week.
2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, I do indeed know how to properly roleplay.
3. Why do you want to play as a City Scanner?
I wish to play as a city scanner because it would be both fun for me, and beneficial to the server/community, and enhance roleplay for other players.
4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, I have read all of the city scanner application guidelines.
5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
I have learned that the scanners interact/speak in OTA format.
6. Do you understand not to argue with other players?
Yes, I understand not to argue with other players.
7. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?
Drop it, agree with the other player to end the disagreement, contact a staff member, or if no staff member is online, quickly leave the server or continue rp elsewhere, and contact one.
8. Why should we accept your application?
I believe you should accept my application because for the past 7 days I have been a loyal player to the server and community, and I plan to stay that way.
9. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?
Yes, I can indeed passive roleplay in depth.
10. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?
Yes, I have knowledge of the lore from the Half-Life series.
11. How active are you on the server?
Every day for at least couple hours.
12. Do you plan on being a loyal player?
Yes, I do plan on staying loyal to the server and community.
13. Give an example of how to roleplay as a city scanner, using the /me command.
/me approaches the citizen, beeping and hovering in the air.
/me takes a snapshot of the citizen, the picture being sent to all available units.
/me beeps some more, and begins to hover away from the citizen, wavering in it's path.
14. What are your Metropolice Force Digits? (You are required to have a MPF character.)
756
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Physical Description: Robotic looking object| Floats using anti-gravity technology| Has light armor in the front
Printer1019- Active Member
- Posts : 33
Join date : 2014-04-12
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
DECLINED.
1. Fix your grammar.
2. #3-Please, be more precise. (How is it going to benefit the community?)
1. Fix your grammar.
2. #3-Please, be more precise. (How is it going to benefit the community?)
Guest- Guest
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
What fucking grammar mistakes?
Printer1019- Active Member
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Join date : 2014-04-12
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
Printer1019 wrote:What fucking grammar mistakes?
"Yes, I do indeed"(put Indeed at the end of the sentance) "I believe you should accept my application because for the past 7 days I have been a loyal player" (Run-on sentence)"/me beeps some more"
Please, don't be rude to a staff member.
Guest- Guest
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
Whew, you guys are tough on apps, aren't you?
Kenny- Administration Council
- Posts : 36
Join date : 2014-03-22
Location : Tucson, AZ, United States
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
Kenny wrote:Whew, you guys are tough on apps, aren't you?
We have to be tough on apps.
Guest- Guest
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
I personally feel that the reasons he was denied for were a bit.. I don't know, much too miniscule to be denied for. Misuse of "indeed"? I mean, cone on. Run-on sentence? Wow. I have no problem with it myself, yet those "grammar mistakes" are ones I make everyday.
Kenny- Administration Council
- Posts : 36
Join date : 2014-03-22
Location : Tucson, AZ, United States
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
Kenny wrote:I personally feel that the reasons he was denied for were a bit.. I don't know, much too miniscule to be denied for. Misuse of "indeed"? I mean, cone on. Run-on sentence? Wow. I have no problem with it myself, yet those "grammar mistakes" are ones I make everyday.
Well, it's his 4th app. All of his apps are full of grammar errors. We need people that know how to speak English correctly.
Guest- Guest
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
Sly775 wrote:Sorry Ser.net, kenny has a point. It is a bit harsh.
It's even on the guidelines for some of the apps.
Sheep wants us to be harsh.
Guest- Guest
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
To be fair, yes we are harsh.
But on the other hand, this is an application.
Unlike when role-playing, you are able to review what you have typed for errors and correct them.
Applications should show you have made an attempt to fix all mistakes.
Either way it is best we don't argue and tear each-other apart.
But on the other hand, this is an application.
Unlike when role-playing, you are able to review what you have typed for errors and correct them.
Applications should show you have made an attempt to fix all mistakes.
Either way it is best we don't argue and tear each-other apart.
Judge- Application Manager
- Posts : 239
Join date : 2014-04-10
Age : 27
Re: [DECLINED] City Scanner app
He does have a point.Sly775 wrote:Sorry Ser.net, kenny has a point. It is a bit harsh.
Printer1019- Active Member
- Posts : 33
Join date : 2014-04-12
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