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Post by Luminous123123 Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:04 pm

Steam Name: Luminous

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198060893244

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:50313758


1. How long have you been on the server? Two - Three weeks.



2. Do you know how to properly roleplay? Yes.



3. Why do you want to be an Overwatch Transhuman Arm? I would like a different role play experience.



4. Have you read all of the application guidelines? Yes.



5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?  Citizens should most always fear overwatch with fear rp. You can only leave if you are called to a certian position.



6. What do you do in this situation. A judgement waiver is called, and your fellow Overwatch units are heading to the slums, just like ordered. You, however, happen to still be in the plaza. I would radio for permission tto attach to the other OTA on there mission to assist them I would use /radio May I attach to the other OTA for assitance? and wait for further orders.




7. Do you understand that you are mostly mechanical and must follow orders, and cannot make decisions or have passive conversations with other players? Yes.



8. Give an example of how to properly speak as an Overwatch Transhuman Arm. What is the situation? "suspect Spotted D2" "ERROR"



9. What are your Metropolice Force digits? 127



10. How active are you as a community member in general? I am very active I usually spend 10-12 hours on the forums and the server together.



11. Do you plan to be a loyal player, and come back to the server often? Yes.



12. Do you plan to flag up often when a Judgement Waiver is in effect? Yes.




CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Ariana Watson
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Height: 5.9
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?): Loyalist
Loyalist Points: 6

Mother's Full Name: Maria Watson

Father's Full Name: Jarred Watson

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen: city 45




Character Backstory:Ariana Watson lived a generally normal life before the Seven Hour War. She grew up in a upper-middle class neighborhood, with nurturing and supporting parents, with a brother. She got average to nominal grades, and continued school until high school. Ariana Watson was born, raised, and lived in Bad Segeberg, Schleswig-Holstein in Germany until the day of the Combine takeover.the day of the Combine takeover.
Ariana Watson worked in a brewery, making a fair amount of money. She had a nice house, and a car. Ariana lost contact with her brother, whom left to go to the army. Ariana met a man named John watson, whom was a co-worker, and in which she fell in love with. They got married, and planned to have children. Then the Seven Hour War happened. Ariana Watson does not remember much from the Seven Hour War, because she fell and hit her head on a blunt object. When she quickly learned of what had happened with the Combine occupation, she kept her husband, who was still with her after all this time, close to her.
Ariana Watson and John lived in the shadow of the Combine, getting their rations, and staying completely out of everyone's way. Later on, they both moved to the Slums, in order to keep even more incognito than she was prior. Instead, Ariana was starting to be involved with the resistance movement, but she strongly tried to tell them that she would never join them.
She didn't want to join any movement that would endanger John. Ariana Watson had befallen a deep manic depression after witnessing her husband John being sick for a long period of time, two months. In this world, if you are sick, then your body takes up more water and food, and there isn't a surplus of that for to be wasted. After deep thinking, Arina knew that she couldn't be neutral any more, and the rebel cause to her, was a dying one. She decided to make a OTA application in order to receive better food for her, and John, in which she would share most of her food with him, until he was better.


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Post by Derp Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:07 pm

Great application +support

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Post by PhoenixShay Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:35 pm

-Support
Looks rushed, and you speak OTA-like incorrectly.

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Post by ℐℎℯ Serious Soul Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:40 pm

+Support Luminous is a good man I'm sure he'll do great
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Post by Guest Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:40 pm

DECLINED.

1. Your char and backstory is copy/pasted from the MPF app.
2. #8-That's not proper example of Overwatch Format.

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