[DENIED] City Scanner Application

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[DENIED] City Scanner Application

Post by Anon on Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:30 pm

Steam Name: [̵̶̸̶̷̅̅͟͞A̸n̸o̴n[̵̶̸̶̷̅̅͟͞VG]

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198039732819

Steam ID:
STEAM_0:1:39733545

1. How long have you been on the server?

Atleast... Three to four months now.

2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?

Yes, I do know how to properly roleplay.

3. Why do you want to play as a City Scanner?

I noticed that there aren't many city scanners online, so I thought I could help by becoming one, as I am online frequently.

4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?

Yes, I've memorized the guidelines.

5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?

You MUST have a MPF character.
You are not a robot with a personality.
I have to type in overwatch format.

6. Do you understand not to argue with other players?

Yes. I understand to not argue with players in a disagreement.

7. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?

I do not get into an argument. Contact a staff member immediately. Either leave the server quickly, or RP somewhere else and contact a staff member from steam.

8. Why should we accept your application?

I always keep the application guidelines up in my steam web browser, so I don't break character. Also, not many scanners are online. I think it would be nice to become a scanner, so I can help the MPF.

9. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?

Yes, I can passive roleplay in detail.

10. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?

Yes, I do. I've read everything on the lore.

11. How active are you on the server?

I'm on 3-5 times a day, so pretty frequently. I am ALWAYS on 3 times a week, at least.

12. Do you plan on being a loyal player?

Yes, I plan on being a loyal player.

13. Give an example of how to roleplay as a city scanner, using the /me command.

/me bobs towards the citizen, attempting to snap a photograph.

14. What are your Metropolice Force Digits? (You are required to have a MPF character.)

528
CHARACTER INFORMATION:


Physical Description: Red Camera|Spinning Disc|Shiny Steel|Light on top|Humming


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Re: [DENIED] City Scanner Application

Post by Judge on Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:44 pm

Can you give me a larger example of passive role-play?
You can post it as a reply.

Also, please go through and make your answers a little more extensive.
You use stops a little too much, resulting in extremely short ideas. Just remove some commas or periods and spruce them up.
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Re: [DENIED] City Scanner Application

Post by Anon on Tue Apr 22, 2014 6:30 pm

More /me's for the passive RP? Okay.

/me would bob up and down, idly.
/me would glide forwards, towards the citizen.
/me snaps a photograph of the citizen, emitting a blinding flash from the light.

Sorry if they're not too good. I have a headache today...
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Re: [DENIED] City Scanner Application

Post by Judge on Tue Apr 22, 2014 7:41 pm

DENIED

I'm going to have to deny this for now.
Your /me's were fine and I recommend incorporating them into your application.

I would however go back and revise the grammar.
It is still insufficient.

Also, re-apply after your head-ache is gone.
It may help you, Smile.

I hope you feel better.
If you have any questions feel free to add me, you were truly almost there.
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