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mrZEE's Vort App (Fixed)

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Post by mrZEE Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:30 pm

APPLICATION:

Steam Name: mrzeeweebob

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198055894854/

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:47814563


1. How long have you been on the server?

About 2-3 weeks.

2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?

Yes, I know how to properly roleplay.

3. Why do you want to play as a Vortigaunt?

No one is ever on as Vort and I want to see and RP as a Vort.

4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?

Yes, I have.

5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?

You cannot use the voritbeam unless you are a Master or above.

6. Do you understand that as an enslaved vortigaunt, if you leave the city your bindings will explode, killing you in the process?

Yes, I do.

7. Do you understand that you are not allowed to use the vortibeam tool unless you are a certain rank? And if you use it before that rank you are subject to ban?

Yes, I understand.

8. What rank are you allowed to use the vortibeam tool at?

Master.

9. Do you understand that you will not be able to powergame with your powers, and you will not be able to use them at all until you learn them from an elder or teacher?

Yes, I will not powergame.

10. Give an example of Vortigaunt passive roleplay using the /me command.

/me follows the officer.
"Here, some trash. Pick it up!"
"Yessir."
/me picks it up
/me walks to the trash bin and dumps it.
"Vortigaunt, follow."
/me follows the officer.
"Vortiguant, there is a dead body to pick up near the Grotto."
/me proceeds to the Grotto to pick the body up and dispose of it.
CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Ju' Lakin
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"

Character Backstory: Ju' Lakin was only a young Vort when he and his family retreated to Earth.  After the portal opened, he followed the orders of Nihilanth and retreated to Earth.  Scared and afraid, he and his family roamed the American Mid-West.  Hiding from everyone, the Vortigaunts did not dare show their faces in fear of getting captured.  

A couple months later, his group reached the outskirts of a city.  They were amazed by the size of the city.  He was hungry.  His group decided to set up camp in the remains of the suburbs.  Ju'Lakin volenteered to get some food.

Ju'Lakin set out that night under the cover of darkness.  Succesfully entering the city, he looked for anything that looked good--headcrabs, random cans of food, dead zombies--anything that was edible.  Upon collecting the food, Ju'Lakin realized it was already dawn.  Running, he took his food and set out for the suburbs. Unfortunately, he got lost and caught the attention of an MPF patrol.  He tried to use his Vortibeam but he was unsuccessful because he was not trained to use it correctly.  Scared and soon surrounded, he gave up.  He was tied and took to the Citadel where he was given cuffs and a job.  

As for his family and friends, he doesn't know what happened to them after the incident.  Currently Ju'Lakin works cleaning the streets in City 17.


Last edited by mrZEE on Fri Jun 06, 2014 10:19 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : I had to fix the Rp and Backstory.)
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Post by Noble Poptart Thu Jun 05, 2014 6:08 pm

-Support , the backstory is a little dry and the Roleplay needs a little bit of fixing. Not too bad though.
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Post by mrZEE Thu Jun 05, 2014 6:51 pm

Thanks for the tips, I will fix it when I get the chance.
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Post by Duspende Thu Jun 05, 2014 7:17 pm

Pending Flesh it out some more. Add to the backstory and some more detailed RP examples.
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Post by mrZEE Thu Jun 05, 2014 7:34 pm

Duspende wrote:Pending Flesh it out some more. Add to the backstory and some more detailed RP examples.
Yes sir! Very Happy 
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Post by Duspende Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:17 pm

Accepted
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