The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

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The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by loleznub on Sun Jun 15, 2014 3:48 pm

This is the story of Chris Gambell from 2.5 years ago @ Relentless HL2RP. Please comment and let me know if you want me to keep going.

Chapter One:
Trees whizzed past the train as John peered out to the falling sunset.   The cart John sat in wreaked of the smell of unwashed linens and sweat.  It was an old model since before the war and hasn't seem much care since then.  Several other citizens belonging to City 11 were scattered throughout the cart.  Inside was silent, save the sound of the wind whipping the train and the train its self hitting track.
Every now and again a citizen sitting farther ahead would let out several coughs or a sneeze.  John looked up and thought
"The rumors of a sickness must really be true...  But why was I chosen to get relocated out of all the other citizens?" he pondered quietly.  John sat on his seat and continued to look out of the scratched up window of the train cart being mesmerized by how vast the world was, before an explosion of noise brought him back to reality.
At the front fo the cart screaming erupted as a Universal Union Unit grabbed a man by his forearm.  John looked slowly out of the corner of his eyes trying to use the seat in front of him as cover to shield himself from the Units view.  John watched silently as the man was tossed onto the floor of the train cart.  The familiar sound of a stunstick 'zapping' on jumped through the train cart.  John quickly turned his head to his right to look back out of the window and let out a deep sigh.  Chills had just ran down Johns back from memories of what the device felt like.
John winced every time the baton struck the mans back with a loud 'thud' and 'zap'.  The man himself was screaming and sounded as if he was attempting to resist.  Looking out of the corner of his eyes again he made out what the Unit was wearing.  The Unit had a large green mask with black covering eye sockets.  He also wore the standard Universal Union uniform including black undergarments and Kevlar.  The uniform made the Unit look bigger than your average humanoid figure and much more intimidating.
The Unit looked up briefly, which was more than enough to make John turn his head back to looking out of the window and to what would now be the darkness of early dawn.  Moments later the commotion at the front of the cart would be over with and the sound of the Units boot hitting the carts floor would slowly make its way towards the back of the cart.  The Unit was slow and as he passed, John slowly turned his head to look over to what he was dragging.
"Two unarmed resistors, one armed." the Unit said into its radio as he passed by John's seat.  The voice was a warped-mechanical one filled with razors that was probably caused by a feature within the mask that made every Universal Union Unit sound the same.  The guard chuckled into his radio which was most likely directed to the radio,  something over his radio, or at the very least its own demented humor.  The laugh its self sounded demented and dark due to the gas mask.
"Affirmative, the armed resistor has been pacified.  En-route with the other two A-C's"  the Unit said as he reached the back of the cart with two unconscious females.  He opened the door and then walked through with the two behind him.
John looked to the window again, this time with wide eyes and a pounding heart.  John took a few moments to slowly calm his self down before turning his attention to the front of the cart.  He slowly raised his head off to the side of the seat and looked down to the floor.  The man laying there was in an unnatural position and John immediately realized something was wrong with him.  After soaking the scene in he realized a pool of blood starting to form around the mans head.
Then, the familiar sound of a stunstick zapping on is heard from behind him followed by the same mechanical chuckle.  Before John is able to turn around his world turns bring white.  Opening his eyes he realizes he's on the floor screaming for help, but it was already too late.  John got hit again, this time his breath was forced out of him and he curled up into a ball.  Moments later, everything went black.

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Re: The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by Enclave096 on Sun Jun 15, 2014 4:17 pm

That was very good. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Re: The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by AbroadHawk on Sun Jun 15, 2014 10:33 pm

Not bad at all! I liked the way you described the vocoders! Keep up the good work my man.  Smile 
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Re: The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by Gabeiscool2002 on Wed Jun 18, 2014 12:24 pm

Sorry about your death, Chris.
It was my fault.
(Gabe Hill, remember? I wanted you to escort the weapon for me.)
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Re: The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by Noahleahy on Wed Jun 18, 2014 2:47 pm

Gabeiscool2002 wrote:Sorry about your death, Chris.
It was my fault.
(Gabe Hill, remember? I wanted you to escort the weapon for me.)
I got 31 loyalist points for telling them. I had 14 before I told them.

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Re: The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by loleznub on Wed Jun 18, 2014 4:19 pm

It's fine, not like we (as far is I know you didn't either) did anything to warrant a PK.

Although the massive amount of PM's I got from some people was slightly annoying trying to meta Razz

I'll update this with Ch. 2 soon ^^

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Re: The Chronicals of Chris Gambell (Previous Universe)

Post by Kookie on Wed Jun 18, 2014 4:49 pm

Can I get a TL;DR...?
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