[DENIED] honeybadgerzXz's MPF Application

Steam Name: Get Shrek'd

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198079392168/

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:59563220


1. How long have you been on the server?
  I'd say about 3 weeks.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
  Yes, sure do.


3. Why do you want to join the Metropolice Force?
   I usually prison RP, or do interesting things. I think that being a Civil Protection Unit would be a nice
   Change. I also think I'd be good at it.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
  Yep.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
  That Civil protection is a serious job. Must not goof around.


6. Did you read and study all of the Metropolice Force guides?
 Yes.


7. Give an example of something that you learned from a Metropolice Force Guide.
  I've learned how to deal with citizens heading to detainment and how to detain them. I learned how to
  Deal with Anti-Citizens as well.


8. What do you do in this situation. You walk into the plaza, and an armed citizen is firing a weapon everywhere. Citizens are screaming, and it isn't looking good.
 Seems like an uprising, and seeing as he has not murdered anyone, it must be a level 4 crime.
 I will detain him, and take him to Nexus for 4-5 cycles in detainment. And confiscate his weapon, of course.


9. Explain the ten step process of properly detaining someone. It's on the guide.
Spot criminal, head to them.
Order them to face nearest wall.
Tie them.
Make them apply, and check data.
If anti-citizen, call backup.
Decide punishment.
Bring them to cell (if detained) and stay with them for that period.
Once detainment is over, make them face wall.
Knock them out with stunstick.
Drag them to area within public Areas.. Release them.

10. Did you read the Division Ranking Guide?
  Yes.


11. Do you understand not to argue with other players?
    Yes.


12. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?
   Contact staff member.


13. Past MPF experiences?
 No.   I've only had run ins with CP. But I've learned how they do things.


14. Why should we accept your application?
     I think I would make an interesting addition to your team.


15. Why should we accept your application over other player's applications?
   I have experience with Clockwork HL2RP. I've been playing this gamemode for over a year and a half, and molded into the roleplaying experience and I think the dedication to this gamemode has made me a very good candidate.


16. Do you tend to complain a lot?
    No.


17. Do you have any close friends who play on the server, that could recommend you?
    No. I have been trying to get friends to play on the server, though.


18. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?
    Yes. It's when I do things such as:
    Marcus drops the box.
    Marcus eats the orange.
    Marcus climbs the ladder.
    Marcus goes for a stroll, hoping to walk until the sweat drips from his forehead.


19. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?
    Yes. I've finished the game, and read stories and multiple fan stories.


20. How active are you on the server?
     I've been going on at least once a day ever since I joined the community.


21. Do you plan on being a loyal player?
     Yes.

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Marcus Palmer
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?): Citizen
Loyalist Points: 0

Mother's Full Name: Rita Noel Portilia

Father's Full Name: Richard Brian Palmer

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen: City 18




Character Backstory: Moved in from City 18 and tries to make his way through life without being noticed.
Doesn't like to stand out. His mother and father were beaten to death before his eyes at a young age.
His brother was killed by a rebel who accused him of being a loyalist. Marcus Palmer moved out of City 18 in hopes of a new start. And so far, things are good. Marcus now tries to help the CP, although not reporting everyone he sees, he will report for something serious. He tries to dispose of waste and such because he thinks that if he does the CP will like him more, which is all he wants. He doesn't want to end up like his parents. Most of anything he does anymore is based upon the death of his parents and brother. He's always being cautious and carefully thinks out everything he does.

+support.

It was a very nice app, but it had some negative stuff in it.

For number 18, you were supposed to give an example of you PassiveRPing.
Your backstory is quite short.
For #15, you have to persuade us so that we think that your app is better than anybody else's.

I would've -supported this app, but I know how you're RPing, so that's why I'm +supporting this app.

Sorry, I fixed some of the things you mentioned. I hope it's better now.

Your application is a little lacking overall detail wise in my opinion so I am going to remain [+-Support], neutral.

DENIED


Sorry, the answers weren't very long, and the application just doesn't show enough effort. Let's look at some examples:

18. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?
Yes. It's when I do things such as:
Marcus drops the box.
Marcus eats the orange.
Marcus climbs the ladder.

That's not very passive. Also:
12. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?
Contact staff member.

It looks like you rushed through, putting only the bare minimum needed to get the message across to us.

Note: If you don't actually have the mindset
of putting in effort, it's not always as simple as fixing a few parts of your application. I suggest re-doing it, and having a longer backstory if you wanted to. Good luck.