[DENIED] Jake's MPF application

APPLICATION:

Steam Name:ron_timmy1

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198067088152/

Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:53411212


1. How long have you been on the server?
About one week.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, and I have been roleplaying for about two years on SA-MP-HP(San Andreas Multi Player HEAVY Roleplay)


3. Why do you want to join the Metropolice Force?
In my history with roleplay I've always played an authority figure as it's always interested me more than being a general civilian. I've been monitoring the CPs since roleplaying in the server and it's something that definitely grabs my attention, I feel the RP that will come with the roll could be so much more enjoyable.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
That you need to have proper grammar.


6. Did you read and study all of the Metropolice Force guides?
Yes, Multiple times.


7. Give an example of something that you learned from a Metropolice Force Guide.
I have learned the weapon checkouts for the ranks.


8. What do you do in this situation. You walk into the plaza, and an armed citizen is firing a weapon everywhere. Citizens are screaming, and it isn't looking good.
I request for backup.


9. Explain the ten step process of properly detaining someone. It's on the guide.
1.Spot and move to the criminal.
2.Order them to face a wall. If they refuse call for backup or use your stunstick.
3.Tie them, Make sure you ask in LOOC if they want to resist.
4.Make them apply and RP viewing their data.
5.If they come up as a anti-citizen call for backup, If not continue on.
6.Decide what kind of punishment is to be received based on the crime.
7.If they are to be detained, bring them into a cell and stay with them for the duration of their detainment period.
8.Once their detainment period is over, order them to face a cell wall.
9.Knock the citizen unconscious using your stunstick.
10.Detianment is now over, Drag them to a area inside the limits wait for them to wake up let them go.


10. Did you read the Division Ranking Guide?
Yes, Multiple times.


11. Do you understand not to argue with other players?
Yes.


12. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?
Contact a staff member, Or if one is not present leave the server or go roleplay elsewhere.


13. Past MPF experiences?
Yes, On Lemon Punch and MadsonGaming.



14. Why should we accept your application?
You should accept my application because One, I have past experience on other servers and know some of the things, I say some because things are different server to server. Secondly, I know starting ranks are not godly robots that are indestructible and how they are supposed to act. Thirdly, I am funny but serious when the situation calls for it. Fourth reason you should accept me is that I can listen very well and will not argue.


15. Why should we accept your application over other player's applications?
You should accept me over the other player's because Like I said before I have a lot of experience on other servers. A second reason you should accept me over other player's applications is that I can do ALOT of passive roleplay before I get bored, Most of the time I prefer passive roleplay.


16. Do you tend to complain a lot?
No, And when I do get into a situation I contact a staff member.


17. Do you have any close friends who play on the server, that could recommend you?
No.


18. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?
Yes, I can passive roleplay, Without getting bored and running around looking for action.


19. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?
I not only have a basic knowledge but, a advanced knowledge of it.


20. How active are you on the server?
Very, I get on everyday.


21. Do you plan on being a loyal player?
Yes, I already get on everyday.

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Jake Hope
Age:25
Gender:Male
Height:6ft
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?):Citizen
Loyalist Points:0

Mother's Full Name: Elizabeth lee Hope

Father's Full Name: Tim lee hope

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen:
City 18

Character Backstory:
When Jake was young, his mother was a teacher and his father was a CEO of a business. His mother would always teach Jake how medicine would work. His father would rant on about how when he is an old man, Jake will take his place as CEO of the family business. Jake didn't like the idea of being a CEO and wanted to become a doctor.

The Portal Storms hit and his parents are zapped by a green creature with three red eyes right infront of him. He runs into his house, into the basement and finds somewhere to hide. Another green creature appeared before him in the middle of the basement. It looked around and ran up the stairs. Days later, some men in strange suits and glowing eyes came in and found Jake. They took him to a place where there were hundreds of other people. They were rounding us up. "Why?" He asked himself.

Almost 5 years since all that happened. Jake is now a lonely citizien in City 17 and has recently heard of the CWU. He is now urging himself to join up and hope to bring at least a partial piece of his dream to reality.

I give [-Support], negative.

You need to put much more effort into your application.
You need to add your character back-story entirely.

You skipped #14 and #15 as well.

forgot 14 and 15

Fixed

DENIED

You need to put forth more effort into your application.
Feel free to re-apply.