[DENIED] Civil Worker's Union

APPLICATION:

Steam Name:Zayo

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198046089259/

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:42911765


1. How long have you been on the server?

Five days to be honest as I know correct me if I'm wrong because I can't remember.

2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?

If there's a person which like to roleplay and knows how to do it or if I need to roleplay a situation by myself I can do it.

3. Why do you want to join the Civil Worker's Union?

To try another type of roleplay not only the rebel civilian. I want to be loyal to the combine and to report events like broking the laws and I'm talking a bout bad things not the little things like jumping or sprinting and the second reason is to roleplay as a seller.

4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?

Yes, I do.

5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?

To be loyal to the Union,to do my best at roleplay and if I meet a roleplay problem or if I'm into a disagreement I need to contact a staff member or if there's no staff to leave the server ASAP to contact on Steam chat, and if there's no staff member on, the steam neither on the server I'll just wait for one to join.

6. What do you do in this situation. You find an injured officer, his radio is missing and nobody is around.

I check the body to locate the injuries if the officer is unconcious if he isn't I ask him where's the injuries. If I'm able to help him walk I'll take him to the closest building or if the nexus it's near obviously to the nexus and then call backup. If I'm not able to help him moving out of the street if he's on the street I quickly try to find a station to call backup after asking him for permision to run.

7. Give an example of how to properly roleplay selling citizens items.

I first stay into my store if I'm not into the store I call the person into the store. To sell I need to ask him first for the tokens to make shure he have them obviously after asking him the product that he want that's listen on the notepad into my store.If there's any problem I try to call an officer somehow.

8. Can you use good grammar, capitalization, and correct punctuation?

Hei, you, stop running! It's illegal!

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name:Zayo Golfwang
Age: 30
Gender:Male
Height:1,89 meters
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?):Civil Worker's Union
Loyalist Points:2 loyal points on my actually character but I want to make a new one that will be loyal to the Union

Mother's Full Name:Aaliyah Golfwang

Father's Full Name:Tyrone Golfwang

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen:City 8 and City 16 (in vacations)

+support.

App was very decent. There's a lot of grammar errors, but you're doing a very good job RPing on the server, so that's why I'm +supporting this app.

I am giving [-Support], negative.

Needs more work, apologies.

+support

Decent overall.

DENIED

Application needs much more effort.

So I got denied because of my grammars right. Let me clear some things. It's not my problem that I'm not the best English speaker if I was born into a country where people don't thalk that language. I don't like to make another application because that will suck dick too as I'm too stupid for English. I hope this cleared some things and I hope that will make you change your mind if not that's it.

Thank you.

+support.

Great RP'r, knows his shit and has a sense of humour.