G H 0 S T.'S Vort App

Steam Name:G H 0 S T.

Steam Profile Link:
http://steamcommunity.com/id/DoMeImmaDoMe/

Steam ID:
STEAM_0:1:39151097


1. How long have you been on the server?
Around a month.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes.


3. Why do you want to play as a Vortigaunt?
To play with friends and have a change in my RP experience.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes.



5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
As a Master you have the ability to influence the minds of humans, including MPF.

6. Do you understand that as an enslaved vortigaunt, if you leave the city your bindings will explode, killing you in the process?
Yes.

7. Do you understand that you are not allowed to use the vortibeam tool unless you are a certain rank? And if you use it before that rank you are subject to ban?Yes.


8. What rank are you allowed to use the vortibeam tool at?
Master+

9. Do you understand that you will not be able to powergame with your powers, and you will not be able to use them at all until you learn them from an elder or teacher?Yes.



10. Give an example of Vortigaunt passive roleplay using the /me command.
/me Studies the Houndeye
Vortigaunt:Another of my kinddddd.
/me Grins
/me Motions the Houndeye to follow


CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name:Lak'Mehn
Gender:Male
Height:5'9

Character Backstory:Lak'Mehn was a fragile kin who never talked to others,He was never taught much by his family he was the "loner" type.He was picked on by many other kin but he always took it to be friendly and never said anything harrasive towards another kin. He grew up playing with other species such as Houndeyes which his parents hated.He always was picked on due to his deformed big eye. As the 7 Hour war occurs he is forced to go leave Xen.He tried to make friends of the Homo-sapiens but his middle arm was chopped off by hunters since then he has never spoke. He pillages and looks for ways to survive,make friends and Void the Combine.

Backstory needs WAY more work.

Just like your CRM application, this seems rushed and not very well thought out...

-support

Rushed.
-SUPPORT

Kek, Im looking back. This took my almost 2 hours to make last night.....

On question 3, get rid of "To Play With Friends". Tell us why it would be a interesting role play experience and how you would make an interesting character. Also like your Cremator app, you might want to add onto the passive roleplay scenario's. It might not always be in your best interest to expand too much, but in applications it really does help. Instead of it being "rushed", I think you just need to add onto a few things.
-Another point about your backstory. Proof read and make it in chronological order. Show some big events that lead into his backstory. *Note:I do not think they would make fun of their kin;I am not an expert though.

Denied Pro tip: The less questions there are to answer, the more text and effort we expect you to put into each one of them.