[DENIED] ALPHA.05-807`s Overwatch Trans-human Arm Application.

APPLICATION:

Steam Name: Lochness

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/id/theuniversalunionunites/

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:8948380


1. How long have you been on the server? About one month.



2. Do you know how to properly roleplay? Yes I do.



3. Why do you want to be an Overwatch Transhuman Arm? I wish to join the Overwatch Transhuman Arm because there is not many OTA on Vortex Roleplay. I also wish to join the OTA because it will improve my Combat RP skills.



4. Have you read all of the application guidelines? Yes I have.



5. What have you learned from the application guidelines? I have learned that as an Overwatch Unit you must speak like an Overwatch Unit. Example: "10-8 UNIT IS ONLINE;;" "PATROLLING DISTRICT FOUR;;. I have also learned that as a OTA, you can not go rouge or be a rebel. You are brainwashed and MUST follow orders. If you do not it is FailRP.



6. What do you do in this situation. A judgement waiver is called, and your fellow Overwatch units are heading to the slums, just like ordered. You, however, happen to still be in the plaza. I would move to their location. If I was ordered to patrol the plaza, I will patrol the plaza.




7. Do you understand that you are mostly mechanical and must follow orders, and cannot make decisions or have passive conversations with other players? Yes I do.



8. Give an example of how to properly speak as an Overwatch Transhuman Arm. "ALL UNITS MOVE TO MY 10-20;;"
"10-8 UNIT IS ONLINE;" "UNIT IS READY FOR ORDERS;"



9. What are your Metropolice Force digits? 05-807



10. How active are you as a community member in general? 5-7 Hours on weekends and 2-3 hours on weekdays. If I get the day off on a weekday then 5-7.



11. Do you plan to be a loyal player, and come back to the server often? Yes I do.



12. Do you plan to flag up often when a Judgement Waiver is in effect? Of course!




CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Bastian Marcell
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Height: 5'4
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?):
Loyalist Points: 0

Mother's Full Name: Christel Katharina

Father's Full Name: Klemens Hubert

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen: City 34.




Character Backstory: Bastian Marcell was born in Germany. He had a happy family that loved him and got good grades in school. Bastian was very strong. Everyday him and his older brother would come home from school and climb the trees. Every time Bastian slowly pulled himself up he got a little bit stronger. Bastian was very happy and emotionally strong. People always picked on him, but he just never let it get to him. "Hey Muscle Hustle!" The boys would say as he walked along the halls of his school. He put his chin up and smiled, showing they couldn`t hurt him. Bastian got a job at the age of 16. He and his older brother decided to work in a bar. It was a cool Saturday night and a girl that caught Bastian`s eye walked into the bar. His older brother looked at her to. "What are you doing?" Bastian asked. "Looking at her" His brother would say. The girl looked at Bastian and smiled. "I love her.." Bastian looked at his brother. "What did you say?" Bastian lost it. He jumped on top of his brother he used to love and punched him in the face. Bastian kept punching and punching until he was unconscious. Bastian got up. "What have I done?" He thought. It was the year of the seven hour war when Bastian got his first fire-arm. He was working at the bar that night. He looked up into the dark sky. A portal opened up. Bastian reached for his gun. Large ships came out and other mechanical Synths. Bastian didn`t know what to do. He hid in his basement and turned on the T.V. The portals where all over the news. He saw who was winning. The Combine was. They were winning. He watched as the USA got shot with a mechanical gun by a large Synthetic creature. Bastian had to make a choice. Join this new alien race, or die.

Sheeplie
Vortex Owner

Posts: 79
Join date: 2014-03-19

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I give you [+Support], positive.
Overall very nice.

You skipped #9 by the way, your digits.

Also, the very end of your application randomly has information about Sheeplie's forum profile.

DENIED

I'm sorry, but you're only an 05. You don't even know how to breach yet...
Re-apply when you have more experience. Otherwise, the application was good.