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G H 0 S T.'S CRM/Cremator App

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Post by G H 0 S T. Thu May 29, 2014 10:39 pm

Steam Name:G H 0 S T.

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/id/DoMeImmaDoMe/

Steam ID:
STEAM_0:1:39151097



1. How long have you been on the server?
Around a Month.

2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, I do.


3. Why do you want to play as a Cremator?
To play with Friends and have a change in my RP experience.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, I do.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
You can only moan and cannot speak aswell as follow all orders by the units.


6. Do you understand not to argue with other players?
Yes, I do.


7. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?
Handle it in PM/Tell an admin about it/Ignore the player


8. Why should we accept your application?
Because I am a trusted member of the community and took time into the Application


9. Can you passive roleplay, in detail?
Yes.


10. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?
More than the average player.


11. How active are you on the server?
4-5 Hours a day.


12. Do you plan on being a loyal player?
Yes.



13. Give an example of how to roleplay as a cremator, using the /me command.
/me Moans in a high pitched noise
/me Looks around notice wood along the wall
/me Raises the immolater
/me Sprays the fire, burning the wood.  



14. What are your Metropolice Force Digits? (You are required to have a MPF character.)
888

CHARACTER INFORMATION:


Physical Description:
7'4|Smells like Flames|Long Dirty Green coat|Slender like arms|Green Gloves|Pale|Breathes heavily


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Post by Ltsparklez Thu May 29, 2014 11:27 pm

This application seems rushed, which sorta contradicts your answer for question 8.


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Post by G H 0 S T. Thu May 29, 2014 11:34 pm

Wasn't rushed Im just sleep deprived  afro Please tell me how I can improve
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Post by ㅤㅤ Fri May 30, 2014 5:59 pm

Question 8 and 3, you should improve. For question 13, try to add onto the the rp situations in 13.
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Post by cherryapplejack Fri May 30, 2014 6:29 pm

As Golden had stated on another cremator application, although the application may look easy, he is raising his standards. This application shows little effort, and it appears you did not care to make it look professional. I would advise improving this application greatly, and putting more detail and thought into your answers.

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Post by Duspende Thu Jun 05, 2014 6:53 pm

Pending
This is Golden's territory.
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Post by Golden-Spy Mon Jun 16, 2014 7:00 am

Physical description means what can be seen. "Smells like flames is not going to work, also your Role-play is very short. The canon I have observed about the Cremators is they shoot acid from their weapons. I may be mistaken. I would suggest you try again, try putting much,much more detail in your RP portion. Not walking and breathing, but more of the actual RP, such as you cleaning D6, and running into some neurotics. I will talk to sheep about this.

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