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Post by abbhub Mon Jun 02, 2014 1:54 am

APPLICATION:

Steam Name:Poseidon/Abbhub

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198015040537/

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:27387404


1. How long have you been on the server?
60 Hours in total.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, i do.


3. Why do you want to join the Civil Worker's Union?
It looks like fun and i have worked up the points for it.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, i have.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
I can also be a medical CWU.


6. What do you do in this situation. You find an injured officer, his radio is missing and nobody is around.
Use my request device using a proper /me and radio for support.


7. Give an example of how to properly roleplay selling citizens items.
/me Takes tokens and slowly walks back to store to get the citizens item.


8. Can you use good grammar, capitalization, and correct punctuation?
Yes, i can.

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name:Cassey Hubbard
Age:24
Gender:Female
Height:6.2
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?):Loyalist
Loyalist Points:Above 15 at least.

Mother's Full Name:Carrie Lee Hubabrd

Father's Full Name:Kevin Troy Hubbard

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen:City 18 and City 15.




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Post by abbhub Mon Jun 02, 2014 1:24 pm

I hope you liked my application, i was not my best yesterday so i must have made a few grammer mistakes sorry if you spot any.

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Post by Noahleahy Mon Jun 02, 2014 2:07 pm

The answers were a little short but I have played with you and you have great RP skills, overall i'm going to give you +SUPPORT

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Post by ㅤㅤ Mon Jun 02, 2014 4:23 pm

Capitalization really does matter. Change all those 'i's to 'I's. Other that that, you should add onto Question 6 and 7. On the subject of Question 7, start with the citizen asking for something. Include everything that would realistically happen, including the citizen's actions.


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Post by abbhub Mon Jun 02, 2014 5:06 pm

Steam Name:Poseidon/Abbhub

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198015040537/

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:27387404


1. How long have you been on the server?
60 Hours in total.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, I do.


3. Why do you want to join the Civil Worker's Union?
It looks like fun and I have worked up the points for it.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, I have.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
I can also be a medical CWU.


6. What do you do in this situation. You find an injured officer, his radio is missing and nobody is around.
Use my request device using a proper /me and radio for support. After the CPs get there I will tell them what I saw.


7. Give an example of how to properly roleplay selling citizens items.
Citizen says "I would like a back pack here are 60 tokens."/me Takes tokens goes back and slowly grabs a backpack.

8. Can you use good grammar, capitalization, and correct punctuation?
Yes, I can.

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name:Cassey Hubbard
Age:24
Gender:Female
Height:6.2
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?):Loyalist
Loyalist Points:Above 15 at least.

Mother's Full Name:Carrie Lee Hubabrd

Father's Full Name:Kevin Troy Hubbard

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen:City 18 and City 15.
Notes: Read this one for app not other one!

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Post by Duspende Thu Jun 05, 2014 6:57 pm

Denied Your heart's in the right place, but you need to put more effort into that RP example. Feel free to re-apply!
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