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Post by karskars12345 Tue Jun 03, 2014 9:40 pm

Steam Name:#Duck³

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198073917842

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:56826057


1. How long have you been a part of Vortex Roleplay?
I must admit, not that long. I have however been playing Half-Life 2:RP very long on other servers and I understand how this server works


2. What would you generalize to be your total playtime on Vortex?
My total playtime is about 3/4 a day


3. How long have you been roleplaying in general?
Nearly 1 and a half years.


4. Do you consider yourself to be efficient at roleplaying?

Yes. I am very serious.

3. Why do you want to be a part of our Metropolice Force?

I feel I could assist the MPF and based on experience it is a very fun part to play in the Half-Life 2:RP community.

4. Have you read all of the Informative Guidelines?
These are the tips at the top of the application.
Yes. I read them twice to make sure I read it correctly.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
1. I need to be good at RP.
2.Don't argue. Get a staff member
3.Don't leave Nexus until 05
4. Do not abuse!
5.Only use a pistol as 04+
6. There are a total of 18 informative guidelines.



7. Did you read and study the Metropolice Force Guide?

Yes I did.

8. What does 10-4 mean?

OK

9. What does 11-22a mean?

Light Contraband

10. List the weapons you'd be allowed to checkout at the following rank: 03, Second Tier.

9MM, Flash Grenade, MP7 SMG,Smoke grenade.

11. Give an example of a moderate contraband item.

Resistance clothing, radio.

12. What is the level of crime for having possession of a moderate contraband item?
What would the punishment be for that level of crime?

Level 3 crime, 2-3 detainment cycles, 4-6 penalty points

13. How does the standard breach and clear protocol work?

The breacher stands on the left side, waiting for the inject command.(He does not enter unless needed for 2cd breach)
The team leader calls the stack,prep, and inject commands. Whether he enters or not is optional.
After the door is breached, pointman 2 will enter first, going to the right side of the room. Pointman one will be right behind pointman two, but clearing the left side.When the room is clear the pointman will say "All clear!"

14. What districts/areas are you allowed to enter at all times?

District 1-5.

15. What districts/areas are you only allowed to enter under certain circumstances? List the circumstances for each area.

Grizzly Grotto(When responding to calls) District 7(When opened for citizens)

16. Which districts/areas are you never allowed to enter, period?

District 6, the construction zone.

17. At what rank are you allowed to leave the nexus?

05+

18. What action do you take in the following situation:
You happen to be in the plaza, and an armed citizen is firing a pulse-rifle everywhere. Citizens are screaming,
a few officers are down, and the situation isn't looking good.
Heres what I would do

1. I would call for backup. Stating my location, amount down, and the suspects weapon.
2. I would get to cover and wait for backup to arrive
3. I would engage the criminal with my backup.
4. Once the suspect is down, I will calm the citizens and turn in the gun to a high rank.

19. Explain the ten step process of properly detaining someone. It's on the guide.
Do not copy and paste.
1. Move in to the criminal
2. Make them face the wall. If they dont listen try to intimidate them with my stunstick or call for backup
3.Tie them. Ask them in LOOC if they resist or not. /me it.
4.Make them apply and /me viewing their data.
5. Check if they are an anticitizen. If they are, call for backup.
6.Decide what punishment to inflict based on the crime.
7.If they are being detained, bring them to a cell and stay with them till its time for them to get out.
8.Once they are done with their cycles, make them face a wall.
9.Knock them out using your stunstick.
10. Drag them to a remote area within the city perimiters and let them go. Wait for them to get up then untie them.

20. How does division ranking advancement work?

It sorta goes backwords. You start out at rct. Then you got to 05, then to 04, etc.

21. At which rank are you allowed to authorize Judgement Waivers?

Tier 2+

22. Which of the following situations would require a Judgement Waiver? Mark [Yes] or [No] next to each situation.

• A Metropolice Unit or City Administrator is murdered by a rogue unit or anti-citizen: Yes
• An anti-citizen fires a weapon anywhere within the city: Yes
• Unarmed Anti-Citizens are sighted or reported: No
• An uprising, or other form of rebel propaganda takes place: Yes
• A Metropolice Unit is assaulted WITHOUT a firearm:No





23. What rank are you allowed to use a pistol at?

04+

24. What happens if you use a pistol before this rank?

Two blackmarks.

25. Do you understand how to use our Advanced Viewdata?

Yes.

26. What happens if you go rogue and get caught?

Perma killed and whitelist remover

27. Do you understand not to argue with other players?

Yes.

28. What should you do if you find yourself in a disagreement with other players?

Get a staff member to resolve it.

29. What are your past experiences in the Metropolice Force?

Ofc, 01 grid and court on shattered gaming.

30. Why should we accept your application?

Because I am a serious and calm tempered player.

31. Why should we accept your application over other player's applications?

Well, I have lots of experience in the MPF, and I am serious.

32. What happens if you do not stay in-character, or try to mess-around and simply void it afterwards?

You will get a whitelist removal.

33. Do you tend to complain a lot?

No. I accept what happens.

34. Do you have any close friends who play on the server, that could recommend you?

Not really.

35. Can you passively roleplay, using detailed actions?

Yes I can.

36. Do you have a basic knowledge and understanding of Half-Life 2 lore?

Yes I do.

37. How active are you on the server?

I play Gmod almost every day.

38. How well can you follow instructions?

Very Well.

39. Do you plan on being a loyal player?
Yes I do.

- Give an example of your own personal passive roleplaying using the /me command.
Note: Give an example that represents the level of detail you use on average. For example, don't type a paragraph for walking across a floor unless you actually plan to use that amount of detail in game.
/me walks down the street, staring at each citizen
*Citizen B-hops*
Me: Hold it!
Me: Citizen, wall.
Citizen345:Fine fine.
/me ties the man's hands together behind his back (In looc) Resist?
(In looc) Citizen: No
/me Successfully ties the man, then proceeds to frisk his body for contrabands
/me Finds no contraband on the citizen
Me: Apply.
Citizen: Citizen345, 12345
/me enters in the information on his PDA and writes something
/me sets his stunstick on low and hits the man in the back of the chest area several times.
Citizen: /me holds head
/me Takes a knife out of a slot on his belt and cuts the mans bindings then puts the knife back
me: Alright, your free to go.
CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Jerry "Deathnote" Tyler
Age:37
Gender:Male
Height: 6'1"
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?): Citizen
Loyalist Points [N/A if None]:

Mother's Full Name: Martha Tyler

Father's Full Name: Arron Tyler

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen:

City 08, City 18.


Character Back story: Before the 7 Hour War, Jerry Tyler learned to play the guitar from his mom, Martha, he was good for a beginner, considering he was only ten. Jerry's dad was an alcoholic and never supported the family, so his mom had two jobs, and was rarely home. One night he was in his room and he heard the door slam. He looked outside and saw his dad leaving. He was angry. "He doesn't support us then he walks out!" He came out of his room and saw his mom with a black eye. Now he was really angry. At school, he was a nerd and everyone bullied and teased him. He never had any respect, except from his mom.
At 13 years old, Jerry was in 7th grade. He would still get bullied. He told a teacher, but they simply ignored him. He had to go through horror at home, and never got any respect for it! Jerry was angry. At everyone. His dad, his teachers, the kids at school. Jerry wished there was a way, he could finally get a ounce of respect. At age 18 Jerry had applied for a job  as a mechanic, he didn't know anything about cars, but the boss said he would teach him. By age 19, Jerry had made the first friend in his life. His boss. They worked on cars together and soon Jerry was his assistant. at age 24, he had walked his mom to the grocery store. They lived in the bad neighborhood (Jerry didn't have enough money to move out yet) so they got mugged sometimes. When Jerry was walking a mugger jumped out and aimed his gun at Jerry. Jerry charged him, but the mugger got a shot off. It missed Jerry so he took the gun and aimed it at the robber
He heard a moan and turned around. His mom had been shot. He ran over and felt for a pulse. There was none. Jerry's mom was dead. And he was angrier than ever. He shot the robber in both knees then hid him in a bush so no one would find him and he would bleed out. At 35 years old, Jerry was in the Mechanics (He still worked there) fixing a Chevy. He finished it and looked for his boss. He heard a moaning and went into the boss'  office. There was a brown-crab like thing with four legs and teeth on the boss' head. Jerry screamed and got in the Chevy. He was in a forested area, so he fled to the city. The radio was down so he couldn't hear the news. Jerry arrived in the city and looked up. Aliens were in the sky. Except these aliens were combined with metal and some had guns. Aliens with crates under their bellies landed and what looked like Men with heavy armor and gas masks came out. Jerry was running and looking behind at them when he ran into one. The thing turned and hit him with the butt of it's gun. He awoke on a train heading to a strange city. He looked on the wall of the train at the newspapers and learned what happened. He got off the train and started a new life. After about 3 1/2 years, He saw something, the MPF gets respect, tons of it, and they don't have to even try! They just intimidate the citizens. Jerry wanted this respect he never got and waited until applications opened up, then he applied.


Last edited by karskars12345 on Wed Jun 04, 2014 11:04 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Forgot to answer 1 question!)

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Post by maggots10 Wed Jun 04, 2014 12:35 am

+support good rper. But fix the backstory make it Cooler.


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Post by Bourneco Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:21 am

The back story. Jesus the back story. Give it like, 2 more paragraphs. And maybe. But until then, I'm most definitely giving you a GIANT -support.
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Post by killer2 Wed Jun 04, 2014 9:30 am

-support

No RP example, backstory needs LOTS of work.
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Post by abbhub Wed Jun 04, 2014 1:53 pm

4. You said that Yes. I am very serious. It is "Yes, I am very serious. Backstory not that long so yeah

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Post by karskars12345 Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:53 pm

Yea. I reread the backstory. I wrote this at night so I was tired. I will change some parts and add more. Thanks for the tips.

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Post by Miraak Wed Jun 04, 2014 4:01 pm

karskars12345 wrote:Yea. I reread the backstory. I wrote this at night so I was tired. I will change some parts and add more. Thanks for the tips.


It seems like most people write these apps at night. Seriously, write them during the day when you still have energy
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Post by karskars12345 Wed Jun 04, 2014 8:04 pm

maggots10 wrote:+support good rper. But fix the backstory make it Cooler.

Thanks man. Hows the new one?

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Post by killer2 Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:20 pm

Sorry, going to keep the -support.

The roleplay scenario is still missing, and even though the backstory is much better than before, in my honest opinion, it still needs revamping. The roleplay scenario is the main reason, the backstory is passable, though.
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Post by karskars12345 Wed Jun 04, 2014 11:58 pm

killer2 wrote:Sorry, going to keep the -support.

The roleplay scenario is still missing, and even though the backstory is much better than before, in my honest opinion, it still needs revamping. The roleplay scenario is the main reason, the backstory is passable, though.
Fixed it. Sorry. I missed it.

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Post by Duspende Thu Jun 05, 2014 9:55 am

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