Vortigaunt Application

APPLICATION:

Steam Name:ron_timmy1

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198067088152/

Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:53411212


1. How long have you been on the server?
About six weeks.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, I do know how to properly role-play and I have been role-playing for a few years now.


3. Why do you want to play as a Vortigaunt?
I want to role-play as a Vortigaunts because there are very little Vortigaunts on and I believe having more Vortigaunts would give more of a Half-Life 2 feel in the server.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, multiple times and I have read the vortigaunt guide.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
The ranks and that you cannot use the vortbeam until master.

6. Do you understand that as an enslaved vortigaunt, if you leave the city your bindings will explode, killing you in the process?
Yes, and I fully accept that if I do leave the city, which I don't plan on.

7. Do you understand that you are not allowed to use the vortibeam tool unless you are a certain rank? And if you use it before that rank you are subject to ban?
Yes, I understand you cannot use the vortibeam tool until master and I accept the ban if I break this rule.

8. What rank are you allowed to use the vortibeam tool at?
Master.

9. Do you understand that you will not be able to powergame with your powers, and you will not be able to use them at all until you learn them from an elder or teacher?
Yes, I fully understand that.


10. Give an example of Vortigaunt passive roleplay using the /me command.
**CP walks up saying "Biotic, sweep the streets."**
Ahh'Jua: Yess, master.
**CP hands me a broom**
/me takes the broom starting to sweep the streats
/me would go around cleaning any dirt
/me after finished would return to the CP
Ahh'Jua: I have finished ssweeping the streetsss master.


CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name:Ahh'Jua
Gender:Male
Height:6'1

Character Backstory:.

When Ahh'Jua was small, the combine invaded his home world. The vortigaunts had to flee to the planet Xen when the Black mesa incident occurred. Unfortunately, his mother was killed by the combine. Ahh'Jua used the rift as his chance to escape and it directed the Vortigaunts to Earth during the 7 hour war. He travelled to A near-by canal and found damaged resources to build a shack.

During the night Ahh'Jua was abducted by combine and was assigned to become a slave, he did not want to do this but he had no choice, if he didn't do it then he would be executed. When he arrived to the Nexus he had to get to work as soon as he got there, he was assigned to an owner, also known as his master. They moved him to a city, this city was city 17. The first couple of months of work was hard for Ahh'Jua, he eventually got used to it though. But, he never got used to the treatment, the combine treated him like dirt.

I like the amount of detail and it looks like you put a lot of time and effort into this, it looks good.

+support

Looks great +support

Hm.. I like it. I just don't like the several grammatical errors you've portrayed, as proofreading is a way to prevent these errors, in the mean time I'd accept this, however you need to work on your grammar on some extent.

ACCEPTED