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✮ Samualol L. Jackson ✮ CWU Application

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Post by ConnorKenway56 Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:28 am

Steam Name: ✮ Samualol L. Jackson ✮

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198084835724

Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:62284998


1. How long have you been on the server?
About one month now.


2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?
Yes, I understand the proper basics of roleplaying.


3. Why do you want to join the Civil Worker's Union?
The reason I would like to join the Civil Worker's Union is I've always enjoyed seeing the roleplaying that takes place with them. Along with that, you are able to give products to the Citizens when they are itching to spend some of their tokens.


4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?
Yes, I have read all the guidelines.


5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?
The Civil Medical Union is included in this application, so if you feel like you would do better in that field you can ask an admin to make you a CMU character.


6. What do you do in this situation. You find an injured officer, his radio is missing and nobody is around.
I would attempt to save his life (since I'm looking to be in the CMU) by looking for the injuries. Once found I would try to locate a Citizen to go find a Civil Protection. I would then keep a close eye on him to make sure nothing turns critical. Once a Civil Protection arrives I would help him carry the injured CP to the Nexus.


7. Give an example of how to properly roleplay selling citizens items.
Since I'm looking to be a CMU it would look kind of like this.
It is 3 in the afternoon and the sound of MPF footsteps is heard across the Plaza. It looks like they are carrying an unconscious Citizen.
MPF: CMU, we have an injured civilian with a bullet wound to the left leg.
CMU:Alright, bring him to the back and I will have an immediate look.
MPF:/me carries the injured Citizen to the back and sets him on the operating table
CMU:/me walks to the back to get a better look at the wound
CMU:By the looks of it, the bullet is about 1/2 an inch into the leg. It isn't by any bone, just into the muscle. I'm able to pull the bullet out, so no amputation of the leg will be needed.
MPF:How long will this take?
CMU:About 2 hours, you can wait in the lobby and I can let you know on his status after the surgery.
MPF: Alright, just inform us on your request device.
CMU: Alright.
CMU:/me begins to gather supplies to perform the removal of the bullet
CMU:/me administers anesthesia to the Citizen, so he will not feel anything or be awake for it
CMU:/me puts protective cloth on the left leg leaving area open where the wound is to perform the surgery
CMU:/me cuts the pant leg off
CMU:/me disinfects the area of the wound
CMU:/me takes the scalpel and cuts the skin to give access for the tweezers to pull out the bullet
CMU:/me cleans up the blood using a cloth
CMU:/me grabs two retractors to pull the skin apart
CMU:/me grabs the tweezers from the table
CMU:/me with carefulness and patience pulls the bullet from the muscle
CMU:/me sets the bullet on the table along with the tweezers
CMU:/me grabs the needle and surgical thread
CMU:/me begins to stitch the muscle back together
CMU:/me moves onto stitching the skin back together
CMU:/me disinfects the area one more time just for precautionary matters
CMU:/me takes off the protective cloth from the leg
CMU:/me takes off the anesthesia
CMU:/me puts on a bandage to protect it
CMU:/me puts away the surgical equipment
CMU: Goes to inform the MPF on the status of the Citizen


8. Can you use good grammar, capitalization, and correct punctuation?
Yes, I can.

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name:Nikolai Yersnov
Age:35
Gender:Male
Height:5' 11"
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?): Loyalist
Loyalist Points: 8

Mother's Full Name:Elena Yersnov

Father's Full Name:Yuri Yersnov

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen: No previous residences.


Last edited by ConnorKenway56 on Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:21 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : #7 Needed to be revised)
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Post by TheElderHobo Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:32 pm

+support

Seems you put effort into it, and did good for the most part.
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Post by ConnorKenway56 Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:25 pm

Thank you for the feedback TheElderHobo.
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Post by Duspende Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:33 pm

Pending - If you want to be CMU, I suggest you show roleplay of an actual treatment. Don't make it something like a papercut or the likes. Make it something that really demonstrates medical skill. Not necessarily brain surgery, but perhaps a deep flesh wound or a bullet in the body.
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Post by ConnorKenway56 Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:21 am

I have edited to the best of my ability. Hopefully you find it to be eligible for the job.
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Post by Duspende Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:33 am

Accepted
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