Arcturus' CWU Application

Steam Name: ✮ Arcturus

Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/id/Mad_Pimps_For_Life/

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:25579763


1. How long have you been on the server?

A month.

2. Do you know how to properly roleplay?

Yes, I do.

3. Why do you want to join the Civil Worker's Union?

I always wanted to interact with other citizens on the server and sell them items, I also wanted a role to play, besides being a citizen.

4. Have you read all of the application guidelines?

Yes.

5. What have you learned from the application guidelines?

I can ask to be in Civil Medical Union by asking a staff member to flag me up as it.

6. What do you do in this situation. You find an injured officer, his radio is missing and nobody is around.

I would attempt to save the CP's life. I would check the wounds of the injured officer and I would ask a citizen nearby to get an officer to help me. I would make sure the officer is safe and his wounds are not bad, and I would stand by the officer, waiting for unit to come, to make sure the officer is okay.

7. Give an example of how to properly roleplay selling citizens items.

A citizen would come to the shop, the CWU clerk would ask "Hello, what would you like to purchase today?" The citizen would say, "I'll take a banana, and a piece of paper." the CWU worker would preceed to say "That will be eleven tokens sir." The citizen then would drop/give the tokens to the CWU worker, and the CWU would go in the back to receive the items in the storage compartment, the worker would grab the banana and paper. Filled with items to be purchased from the store, the CWU worker closes the compartment. The clerk would then walk up to the front counter and would preceed to put the items onto the counter. The citizen then would pick up the items, the clerk then would say "Thank you, come again." as the citizen walks out of the store.

8. Can you use good grammar, capitalization, and correct punctuation?

Yes, I can.

CHARACTER INFORMATION:

Name: Leon Walfridsson
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0
Status (Loyalist, Civil Worker's Union, or Citizen?): Loyalist
Loyalist Points: 20

Mother's Full Name: Chasity Walfridsson

Father's Full Name: Felix Walfridsson

Previous locations of residence before city seventeen:

City 8.

I feel like this needs a bit more effort.

Ltsparklez wrote:I feel like this needs a bit more effort.

How so?

Pending - Add some more detail. Also, the example of RP is supposed to be either in /me's or in a story told through actions or as a story.

Duspende wrote:Pending - Add some more detail. Also, the example of RP is supposed to be either in /me's or in a story told through actions or as a story.

Hm, I see, how about now?

It's still not sufficient. A story would go; "A man walks into the store as the CWU worker asks him; "What'll it be?" and the man responds "The usual". The worker walks towards the storage compartment, taking out a small cardboard box filled with something as he walks back to the counter" and so on. Where you actually display some sort of scenario, rather than just a "setting".

Duspende wrote:It's still not sufficient. A story would go; "A man walks into the store as the CWU worker asks him; "What'll it be?" and the man responds "The usual". The worker walks towards the storage compartment, taking out a small cardboard box filled with something as he walks back to the counter" and so on. Where you actually display some sort of scenario, rather than just a "setting".

I think I get what you're saying, how about now?

Not entirely. It still seems a little "stiff". Try to make it more organic. Instead of ending it with "He would then go grab the stuff..."

Do it more like; "He walked towards the compartment, taking out the items." Like really explaining what he's doing.

Duspende wrote:Not entirely. It still seems a little "stiff". Try to make it more organic. Instead of ending it with "He would then go grab the stuff..."

Do it more like; "He walked towards the compartment, taking out the items." Like really explaining what he's doing.

Got it, I added in a little more details.